Found at Pixabay.com
Free forming words
rhythm and rhyme
Tone dark/mood light…
Posted by Ste J on 24/09/2016 in My Writings, Poetry
Tags: Books, Poetry, Reading, writing
24/09/2016 at 23:24
I love the picture, and the words! Everything ends with the written word in your world…
25/09/2016 at 09:45
It certainly does my friend, can’t get enough of it, it’s the drug that keeps on giving!
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25/09/2016 at 01:44
Very quizzical….How’s about expanding on these thoughts? In, for example, second, third, and fourth stanzas? I somehow think you have more to say….?….
25/09/2016 at 09:31
I could, yet I feel like being ever so slightly enigmatic about it. Less is more, or probably not in this case…
25/09/2016 at 19:53
Succinct, but so evocative!
26/09/2016 at 18:31
Coming from you that makes me proud of my work, thank you!
27/09/2016 at 19:38
You are so welcome, I was just being honest 🙂
25/09/2016 at 23:34
Wow! So simple, revealing & sexy! Love this!
26/09/2016 at 18:35
Thank you my friend, once again I treat you all to a bit of my own writing before inspiration runs away again!
26/09/2016 at 03:27
Strychnine is quite the vocabulary word! Such an interesting word choice for this poem… I agree with Shadowoperator — I wish you’d expand a little more and let me in on the thoughts going on in your brain!
Perhaps another time, although when I penned it I did consider it finished and I am not usually in the habit of being so succinct.
26/09/2016 at 22:57
I agree with you – less is definitely more! Very nice Ste.
27/09/2016 at 18:28
Although sadly not where money is concerned!
27/09/2016 at 19:13
30/09/2016 at 07:38
I really enjoyed this one Ste J…evocative, mysterious, dreamy. I think that less is more in this case.
30/09/2016 at 12:28
I am good at doing less if I can get away with it!
02/10/2016 at 05:54
Haha! I doubt that Ste J. 🙂
Maniparna Sengupta Majumder
02/10/2016 at 00:08
This is so evocative…loved it!
And, also the phrase, “Creative strychnine”… 🙂
02/10/2016 at 11:29
I was pleasantly surprised when that phrase popped into my head and I promise to try and write more.
04/10/2016 at 19:52
Ohhhhh rhythm, more words, more creativity and… an amazing post here!!
05/10/2016 at 13:01
Thank you my friend! I am so happy you like it, I’m not anywhere near your level of skill but it is good to mix it up from a book review and keep you guessing to what’s coming next.
07/10/2016 at 18:15
Oh don’t put yourself down as I really do like the creativity of your post! Keep mixing it up and I’ll keep visiting 🙂
08/10/2016 at 12:29
It’s less putting myself down and more of an observance on my skills so far but it is does encourage me to push myself relentlessly in all my writings and wandering around such blogs as I regularly visit certainly gives me much to help me become better (although this sentence is a long meandering one so doesn’t count). My mixing bowl is filling up as we speak.
22/10/2016 at 01:58
This pic and words are hypnotic and now gracing my desktop 😀 Thanks, Ste J!
24/10/2016 at 13:45
Ooo, thank you that is most kind, I am really pleased and honoured by your words.
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