I close my eyes
Entering a forest of yellow hue
turned green, behind lids
an ever changing patina of labyrinthine leafiness.
squeeze them tight
Mingling with gossamer thoughts
Fragile, yet protected
as I finally drift off
block out the remaining light
to inscribe fanciful thoughts
– contemplations of the forever –
in the stardust of my dreams…
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Thanks to Ellie Edon for allowing me to use her art, check out more at http://ellieedon.wixsite.com/artwork and as ever thanks for reading, I will be visiting again when time permits.
What a beautiful piece, Ste J.
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Thank you, had part of this written for a while but wasn’t really getting anywhere with it until I chanced about the drawing and then finished it straight off.
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Both your poem and Ellie’s artwork are fabulous!
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Thank you, it was good to come across a piece of art that complimented my words and helped add a few more ideas as well.
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You should write more poetry!
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I always post one and think I could do it on a regular basis but inspiration doesn’t always strike, I need to train myself to write more, I will endeavour to do so nonetheless.
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Wow! Beautiful painting…. striking poem!
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Thank you, I was unsure if I wanted to add more but eventually plumped for the less is more excuse/idea.
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That beautiful Art absolutely compliments your beautiful words XOXO *Catherine*
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Thank you! I get picky when finding a photo or picture to go with my words, stumbling across this one was very fortuitous.
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Beautiful words and beautiful artwork. 🙂
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Thank you, it was a thoroughly enjoyable process.
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Beautiful poem Ste. I’m glad you found the inspiration to finish it.
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The internet is great for stumbling upon things, usually I get the idea first and then look or a picture but this time was more jigsaw puzzle like and I am liking that approach.
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This is beautiful! And the art is gorgeous too. I had no idea you wrote poetry! #Impressed
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I write occasionally and not to your level but I do dabble when the fancy takes me and have published a few on here, all to kind words which makes Ste happy.
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You never cease to surprise me…book reviews, travelogue and today poetry! This is beautiful Ste J 🙂
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Thank you! I like to mix it up, keep you all on your toes so you keep coming back!
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It works 😀
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This is just amazing Ste J…beautiful! And you chose the perfect piece of art to showcase your words. 🙂
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Thank you, it is always a great feeling to find something that accompanies the words, which is often a challenge as the words aren’t written with an idea in mind, finding the perfect fit sometimes takes ages.
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I find that when I am trying to take photos and convey a feeling.
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I would never have guessed, your photos always look effortless and capture the beauty of your surroundings.
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Thanks Ste J.
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very interesting form 😉 Liked it!
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Thank you, I’m all for experimenting!
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Your poem has perfectly complemented Ellie’s artwork! Why don’t you write poems more often, Ste?
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I struggle with inspiration, I am jealous of you poets who can write many poems and and garner inspiration from anywhere…I guess I look at the world in a different way but I do want to write more and am aiming for at least one a month to begin with.
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That would be great for a start. I’m looking forward to your next one… 🙂
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Pressure’s on now, I will do my best to live up to my promises.
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Great…. 😀
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Read it four times and was like, what an impressive poem, Ste! I like this one than the last I have read years ago.
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Thank you my friend, I do occasionally write one up as you know, I think my writing has improved, although my technique…well I don’t want to be too self critical.
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Ste J, this piece is absolutely brilliant! Seriously—brilliant! And the painting is beautiful 🙂 When I visited Ellie’s site, I thought there’d be lot of landscapes, but her specialty is finely detailed animals. Wonderful 🙂
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I randomly followed a link a friend had put on Facebook and couldn’t pass up the opportunity, I am glad the words work well with it. Now if I could only think of an animal poem…
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Oh, I’m sure you can! I hope you don’t mind me making suggestions, but I think it all comes down to decisiveness and focus, just as you focused on the specific act of falling asleep in this one.
I don’t know if it can be ANYthing about an animal or animals, but if it can, I would suggest:
– first narrow it down by picking an animal that you’re either passionate about, are inspired by or which evokes strong emotion/s, whatever they may be
– then, unless you want to describe everything about that animal, focus in on one act and then let your mind flow.
Good luck and if you write it, please share! 😀
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Good advice, I’ve never really done anything animal before but I will see what I can come up with.
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